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Tehilim 141: Let my prayer stand as incense

תְּהִלִּים קמ״א · מִזְמוֹר לְדָוִד
Ten verses, an evening prayer, and the verse everyone knows is the second: let my prayer stand as incense before You, my lifted palms as the evening offering. What is unusual is what the speaker asks for first. Most psalms of this shape ask to be protected from enemies; this one asks to be protected from becoming one, with a guard posted on his own mouth and a request not to sit down at their table. Then verses 5 to 7 fall apart. They are among the hardest Hebrew in the book, the standard translations disagree with each other line by line, and the honest reading says so instead of smoothing them. Verses 8 to 10 come back to plain language and to the imagery of traps.
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1
מִזְמוֹר לְדָוִד
יְהֹוָה קְרָאתִיךָ חוּשָׁה לִּי
הַאֲזִינָה קוֹלִי בְּקׇרְאִי לָךְ
מִזְמוֹר
miz-MOR
a psalm
לְדָוִד
le-da-VID
of David
A psalm of David.
יְהֹוָה
a-do-NAY
the LORD
קְרָאתִיךָ
kra-ti-CHA
I have called You
חוּשָׁה
chu-SHA
hurry
לִּי
li
to me
LORD, I have called You; hurry to me.
הַאֲזִינָה
ha-a-zi-NA
give ear to
קוֹלִי
ko-LI
my voice
בְּקׇרְאִי
be-kor-I
when I call
לָךְ
lach
to You
Listen to my voice when I call to You.
All urgency: four verbs of appeal in two short lines, with the calling stated at the start and repeated at the end so the verse closes where it opened.
2
תִּכּוֹן תְּפִלָּתִי קְטֹרֶת לְפָנֶיךָ
מַשְׂאַת כַּפַּי מִנְחַת עָרֶב
תִּכּוֹן
ti-KON
let be set
תְּפִלָּתִי
tfi-la-TI
my prayer
קְטֹרֶת
KTO-ret
as incense
לְפָנֶיךָ
le-fa-nei-CHA
before You
Let my prayer stand as incense before You,
מַשְׂאַת
mas-AT
the lifting of
כַּפַּי
ka-PAI
my palms
מִנְחַת
min-CHAT
as the offering of
עָרֶב
A-rev
evening
my lifted palms as the evening offering.
The request is not that the prayer be answered but that it be accepted, and the standard of acceptance is the evening service of the sanctuary.
3
שִׁיתָה יְהֹוָה שׇׁמְרָה לְפִי
נִצְּרָה עַל דַּל שְׂפָתָי
שִׁיתָה
shi-TA
set
יְהֹוָה
a-do-NAY
the LORD
שׇׁמְרָה
shom-RA
a guard
לְפִי
le-FI
for my mouth
Set a guard, LORD, over my mouth,
נִצְּרָה
nitz-RA
keep watch
עַל
al
over
דַּל
dal
the door of
שְׂפָתָי
sfa-TAI
my lips
keep watch at the door of my lips.
A sentry posted on the speaker's own mouth. In the first half of this psalm the threat is what he might say, not what is said about him.
4
אַל תַּט לִבִּי לְדָבָר רָע
לְהִתְעוֹלֵל עֲלִלוֹת בְּרֶשַׁע אֶת אִישִׁים פֹּעֲלֵי אָוֶן
וּבַל אֶלְחַם בְּמַנְעַמֵּיהֶם
אַל
al
do not
תַּט
tat
incline
לִבִּי
li-BI
my heart
לְדָבָר
le-da-VAR
to a thing
רָע
ra
evil
Do not let my heart lean toward an evil thing,
לְהִתְעוֹלֵל
le-hit-o-LEL
to busy myself with
עֲלִלוֹת
a-li-LOT
deeds
בְּרֶשַׁע
BRE-sha
in wickedness
אֶת
et
with
אִישִׁים
i-SHIM
men
פֹּעֲלֵי
po-a-LEI
who work
אָוֶן
A-ven
iniquity
to busy myself with wicked deeds beside men who work iniquity,
וּבַל
u-VAL
and let not
אֶלְחַם
el-CHAM
me eat
בְּמַנְעַמֵּיהֶם
be-man-a-MEI-hem
of their delicacies
and let me not taste their delicacies.
The longest verse, and the danger moves outward in stages: the heart leans, then the deeds are shared, then he is eating at their table. The last item is the smallest and the most concrete.
5
יֶהֶלְמֵנִי צַדִּיק חֶסֶד וְיוֹכִיחֵנִי
שֶׁמֶן רֹאשׁ אַל יָנִי רֹאשִׁי
כִּי עוֹד וּתְפִלָּתִי בְּרָעוֹתֵיהֶם
יֶהֶלְמֵנִי
ye-hel-me-NI
let him strike me
צַדִּיק
tza-DIK
a righteous man
חֶסֶד
CHE-sed
kindness
וְיוֹכִיחֵנִי
vei-o-chi-che-NI
and let him rebuke me
Let a righteous man strike me: that is kindness, and let him correct me.
שֶׁמֶן
SHE-men
oil
רֹאשׁ
rosh
of the head
אַל
al
let not
יָנִי
ya-NI
refuse
רֹאשִׁי
ro-SHI
my head
Oil of the head, let my head not refuse it.
כִּי
ki
for
עוֹד
od
still
וּתְפִלָּתִי
ut-fi-la-TI
and my prayer
בְּרָעוֹתֵיהֶם
bra-o-TEI-hem
against their evils
For still my prayer stands against their evils.
Here the Hebrew gets very hard. A blow from a righteous man is welcomed as kindness, and after that almost every word in the verse is contested.
6
נִשְׁמְטוּ בִידֵי סֶלַע שֹׁפְטֵיהֶם
וְשָׁמְעוּ אֲמָרַי כִּי נָעֵמוּ
נִשְׁמְטוּ
nish-me-TU
they were flung down
בִידֵי
vi-DEI
by the hands of
סֶלַע
SE-la
rock
שֹׁפְטֵיהֶם
shof-TEI-hem
their judges
Their judges were flung down by the hands of the rock,
וְשָׁמְעוּ
ve-sham-U
and they heard
אֲמָרַי
a-ma-RAI
my words
כִּי
ki
that
נָעֵמוּ
na-e-MU
they were sweet
and they heard my words, that they were sweet.
One of the most obscure verses in the book. Judges, a rock and sweet words are all there, and how the three connect is not recoverable with any confidence.
7
כְּמוֹ פֹלֵחַ וּבֹקֵעַ בָּאָרֶץ
נִפְזְרוּ עֲצָמֵינוּ לְפִי שְׁאוֹל
כְּמוֹ
kmo
like
פֹלֵחַ
fo-LE-ach
one who splits
וּבֹקֵעַ
u-vo-KE-a
and breaks open
בָּאָרֶץ
ba-A-retz
in the earth
Like someone cleaving and splitting open the ground,
נִפְזְרוּ
nif-ze-RU
were scattered
עֲצָמֵינוּ
a-tza-mei-NU
our bones
לְפִי
le-FI
at the mouth of
שְׁאוֹל
she-OL
Sheol
our bones are scattered at the mouth of Sheol.
Scattered bones at the mouth of Sheol, introduced by a comparison whose subject is never stated. The plural our arrives here without warning and does not return.
8
כִּי אֵלֶיךָ יֱהֹוִה אֲדֹנָי עֵינָי
בְּכָה חָסִיתִי אַל תְּעַר נַפְשִׁי
כִּי
ki
for
אֵלֶיךָ
e-lei-CHA
to You
יֱהֹוִה
ye-ho-VI
the LORD
אֲדֹנָי
a-do-NAI
my Lord
עֵינָי
ei-NAI
my eyes
For my eyes are turned to You, LORD my Lord;
בְּכָה
be-CHA
in You
חָסִיתִי
cha-si-TI
I have taken refuge
אַל
al
do not
תְּעַר
te-AR
pour out
נַפְשִׁי
naf-SHI
my soul
in You I have taken refuge, do not pour out my life.
The language clears. Eyes lifted, refuge taken, and one request: that the life not be tipped out the way water is emptied from a jar.
9
שׇׁמְרֵנִי מִידֵי פַח יָקְשׁוּ לִי
וּמֹקְשׁוֹת פֹּעֲלֵי אָוֶן
שׇׁמְרֵנִי
shom-re-NI
keep me
מִידֵי
mi-DEI
from the hands of
פַח
fach
a trap
יָקְשׁוּ
yak-SHU
they have set
לִי
li
for me
Keep me from the trap they have set for me,
וּמֹקְשׁוֹת
u-mok-SHOT
and the snares of
פֹּעֲלֵי
po-a-LEI
the workers of
אָוֶן
A-ven
iniquity
and from the snares of those who work iniquity.
The imagery is hunting rather than warfare. The speaker is game, and what he asks for is not victory but simply not to be caught.
10
יִפְּלוּ בְמַכְמֹרָיו רְשָׁעִים יַחַד
אָנֹכִי עַד אֶעֱבוֹר
יִפְּלוּ
yip-LU
let them fall
בְמַכְמֹרָיו
ve-mach-mo-RAV
into his nets
רְשָׁעִים
re-sha-IM
the wicked
יַחַד
ya-CHAD
together
Let the wicked fall into his own nets, all of them together,
אָנֹכִי
a-no-CHI
I myself
עַד
ad
while
אֶעֱבוֹר
e-e-VOR
I pass by
while I myself pass by.
The trap is turned around, and the closing word is not triumph but passage. He wants to get past, not to win.

♦ PARDES analysis: פרדס

The four levels of Jewish reading of the sacred text: פשט Peshat (literal meaning), רמז Remez (symbolic allusion), דרש Drash (midrashic interpretation), סוד Sod (mystical meaning). The word פרדס means "orchard", each level is a fruit.

פשט · Peshat: literal meaning

The shape is clear even where the words are not. Verses 1 and 2 ask to be heard and set the standard for being heard, the evening service. Verses 3 and 4 ask for restraint, first on the mouth, then on the heart, then on the company kept and the food eaten with it. Verses 5 to 7 are the obscure centre. Verses 8 to 10 return to plain Hebrew and to hunting imagery: eyes lifted, refuge taken, traps, snares, nets. The unusual thing is the direction of the first request. Most psalms of this kind ask for protection from enemies; this one starts by asking for protection against joining them, and only reaches the enemies at the end.

רמז · Remez: allusion

Verses 5 to 7 are among the hardest Hebrew in the book, and the translations in circulation differ so widely that they cannot all be renderings of the same understood text. At שֶׁמֶן (she-men, v.5) oil of the head can be choice oil or oil for anointing. The verb at יָנִי (ya-ni, v.5) has no securely identified root and is often emended. At בִידֵי (vi-dei, v.6) the phrase reads by the hands of a rock, which is not idiomatic Hebrew for anything, and the subject, their judges, arrives after the verb. Verse 7 opens with a comparison whose subject is left unstated and ends with עֲצָמֵינוּ (a-tza-mei-nu, v.7), our bones, a first person plural found nowhere else in the psalm. Editors have proposed reconstructions and none has won agreement. The description that fits the evidence is that the text here may be damaged. What survives clearly is the vocabulary: kindness, rebuke, oil, prayer, judges, sweetness, bones, Sheol. The links between them do not.

דרש · Drash: midrashic reading

Verse 2 is the verse the psalm is known by, and the reading that made it famous is that a prayer can occupy the slot an offering occupied. The incense of Exodus is burned in the morning and at dusk, and the daily offering has its second lamb toward evening, so the two halves of the verse point at the two evening acts of the sanctuary and pair them with two human ones, speech and lifted hands. Hosea makes the same move in chapter 14 with the words of the lips in place of bulls. Verse 3 has been taken in the other direction, not as substitution but as ethics: a guard is asked for the mouth in the same breath in which the mouth is offered, so the organ that prays is also the one that has to be watched. Read together the two verses make speech both the offering and the risk.

סוד · Sod: mystical reading

The choice of incense rather than a slaughtered animal carries the mystical reading. Incense leaves nothing behind, no meal and no hide, and the whole of it goes up as smoke, which makes it the offering that matches a prayer nobody hears. The lifted palms of כַּפַּי (ka-pai, v.2) are the body copying that motion. Evening is associated in kabbalistic writing with judgement rather than with kindness, and an evening prayer therefore asks to be received rather than to be granted. That is why every request in this psalm is a restraint: guard the mouth, do not incline the heart, do not pour out the soul, keep me from the trap. Even the last verse asks only for passage, אֶעֱבוֹר (e-e-vor, v.10), and not for a victory.

Hebrew text: Miqra according to the Masorah (MAM), after the Aleppo Codex, via Sefaria, CC BY-SA. English: The Holy Scriptures, a New Translation (JPS 1917), via Sefaria, public domain. Transliteration generated by this site's own engine (assets/translit.js).